Sunday, May 25, 2008

Haiku Time

Paddy runs away
Ooongatz is gonna eat you
Oh, run Paddy run

If you've got a silly haiku. I would like to hear it!

Here's the movie one more time


At May 25, 2008 at 1:31 PM , Blogger Lori said...

Hey Chris!

Umm, the teacher in me feels the need to correct you on your Haiku. You see, you are following a 7-5-7 syllable pattern, when the actual pattern of a Haiku is 5-7-5. It's a nice try though!

Chris is a fun guy
Always a comedian
Keep up the good work

At May 26, 2008 at 1:09 PM , Blogger jasonlparks said...

Very Well then Chris,
I shall write you a Haiku
What up now, sucka!

At May 26, 2008 at 1:10 PM , Blogger The Lunaverse said...

Thank you Lori. I have changed it. The last line now has seven syllables. Deal with it.

At May 26, 2008 at 3:22 PM , Blogger Lori said...

Good job, Chris! Well done!
I like your new Haiku more
Keep them comin', man.

This Haiku stuff is addicting! :)


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