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posted by The Lunaverse @ 11:31 AM 4 Comments
Hey Chris!Umm, the teacher in me feels the need to correct you on your Haiku. You see, you are following a 7-5-7 syllable pattern, when the actual pattern of a Haiku is 5-7-5. It's a nice try though!Chris is a fun guyAlways a comedianKeep up the good work
Very Well then Chris,I shall write you a HaikuWhat up now, sucka!
Thank you Lori. I have changed it. The last line now has seven syllables. Deal with it.
Good job, Chris! Well done!I like your new Haiku moreKeep them comin', man.This Haiku stuff is addicting! :)
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Hey Chris!
Umm, the teacher in me feels the need to correct you on your Haiku. You see, you are following a 7-5-7 syllable pattern, when the actual pattern of a Haiku is 5-7-5. It's a nice try though!
Chris is a fun guy
Always a comedian
Keep up the good work
Very Well then Chris,
I shall write you a Haiku
What up now, sucka!
Thank you Lori. I have changed it. The last line now has seven syllables. Deal with it.
Good job, Chris! Well done!
I like your new Haiku more
Keep them comin', man.
This Haiku stuff is addicting! :)
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